55 Fiction:- THE PRANK

55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.

The Prank
They were laughing at Him. Two days he wasted on on shadowing that person. At times He felt his friends were watching Him. He was too excited to be suspicious!
Now He knew 'It' was prank! Great detective He would be!!
That night somebody shot Him.
Now His soul is laughing at his friends.

Comments

Vineeta said…
Dark humour I would say! I could actually see the picture when I was reading. Good one! Keep coming such fictions :)
August 23, 2009 at 9:03 AM
Unknown said…
hey... it was really nice.... good one....pra..
August 23, 2009 at 9:04 AM
Indian Pundit said…
Hello Pra

Vineeta is right.

Its a dark humour.

Good one.

Cheers now i am gonna read your previous post.
August 23, 2009 at 9:26 AM
Shruti said…
Hey prahansa
I must say its awesome!!

KEEP WRITING!!!
August 23, 2009 at 11:54 AM
Unknown said…
Yup... Even i cud picturize while reading it!!!!! Gud one...

thanx for visiting ma blog!!! following you
August 23, 2009 at 12:07 PM
Shruti said…
pra, see my recent post!
August 24, 2009 at 12:30 AM
Prashansa said…
Thanks everyone!
Hi Sumeet, welcome to simple story!
Thanks for following!
August 25, 2009 at 1:20 AM
Urmi said…
Very nice and lovely post. I liked it very much.
August 25, 2009 at 7:31 AM
Musings of a lonely traveler said…
That's unpredictable and a good try; :)
August 25, 2009 at 1:06 PM
Shruti said…
check out my new post pra.. Its the same 55Fiction :)
August 26, 2009 at 12:53 AM
pawan said…
Where is the comment I posted earlier :(
August 26, 2009 at 10:22 PM
Anonymous said…
Hey that was a nice one..
August 27, 2009 at 4:38 AM
Shruti said…
pra,hi :)
Check out my recent post
August 29, 2009 at 6:29 PM
Indian Pundit said…
Hello Pra

Check out my blog.
An award is waiting for you.

Cheers
August 29, 2009 at 8:36 PM
Shruti said…
Prahansa,
Check out my recent post re:)
September 1, 2009 at 12:10 AM
Amit Kumar Singh said…
Hilarious... :)
A gr8 twist in tale..
interesting..... :)

cheers!!
September 2, 2009 at 10:20 PM
Whats In A Name said…
That was a really good 55 fiction story.

First timer here...
The place is really looks cool...Hope to see you around..
Regards,
Whatsinaname
September 6, 2009 at 8:26 PM
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