Saturday, September 5, 2009

55 Fiction - IN VAIN!

55 Fiction is a form of microfiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words. For more information check(http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/55_Fiction)

This is my only third attempt at it!

IN VAIN!



It was too late. His letter returning Ria's love was in her hands. Her eyes filled with tears. If only the letter had arrived yesterday! Ria would have gone with him. But now she couldn't! That's fate!

After a long wait Ria had gone without him to be a successful woman!

5 comments:

Musings of a lonely traveler said...

Pra! Liked this one; you caught that moment beautifully :)

Sweet Nothings!!! said...

Oh my ..was the reaction..loved your post.

pawan said...

That was well, beautiful!
Good one!

Shruti said...

hey thats a cute one!!
Well etched!!
Great going!

pra said...

Thank you lonely traveller.
welcome to my blog sweet nothings!thank you for your comments.
Hi Pawan, You saying beautiful is a great achievement in itself for me! Thank you!
Thanks Shruti, You are my inspiration for 55 fiction!